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Ninmu Nanmu - C1 - P2 by =TG-TF-74:iconTG-TF-74:

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So.... made a second page. This one got way too crowded, I think. I need to be more careful to save space for text as I go. It was tricky fitting those speech bubbles in, and there isn't as much dialogue as I had hoped in a couple of spots.

All in all, good stuff.

Still not sure how many of these I'll make or what kind of schedule they might see. Haven't started work on page 3 yet, so who knows. I might.

(P.S. How strong does language need to be before I tag the Deviation mature content? They say that I should mark it if I "feel uncomfortable with minors seeing it" or something, but I swear in front of minors relatively often, so I'm not really the one to ask.)

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~Catgirl-Katty May 11, 2009, 2:10:33 PM
I think maybe do the mid-mature rating. Just for some of the words that were said.

I think I understand why you did not plan out the word bubbles. I think it goes back to when the old comics were just simbols that you did not need to plan it out as hard. If I am wrong, sorry.

All in all, I think it was a very good page. You main character seems to reak of bad, yet cool.

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~laughingman19 May 11, 2009, 2:23:19 PM
Maybe if you avoid words like shit and fuck. And I really enjoy the page and I hope you do more. Very entertaining, even if we haven't really gotten to the plot yet.

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~tghawk555 May 11, 2009, 3:01:40 PM
I love how you draw your characters! Each with their own color... they're so vibrant!


...How soon can we expect the TG?
:icontg-tf-74:
=TG-TF-74 May 11, 2009, 3:38:59 PM
Sometime in the next three pages, I'd say. I'd like to do it on the next page, but I have a feeling I'll need to push it back for the pacing to work.
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~Robtcee13 May 11, 2009, 3:48:30 PM
Anything that would get a game rated M should probably be marked for mature content.

Anything beyond ass, bitch, and etc. That's my stand at least.

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So learn from your mistakes
And stand behind
The choices that you make

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~Artificer-Urza May 11, 2009, 3:55:18 PM
Well, it starts out interesting enough. Is it going to be a 'no good deed goes unpunished' kind of thing?

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*NekoLLX May 11, 2009, 4:39:23 PM
agree

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~acebuckeye13 May 11, 2009, 5:22:50 PM
Pretty good so far. Really good work.

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~animefan279 May 11, 2009, 7:08:03 PM
That asn't crazy. That was just easy and predictable.

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